Good haiku, although not in 5-7-5 haiku format... Watch a haiku in a video in Youtube at https://youtu.be/pg1apQjPrkY Read also article in http://stenote.blogspot.com/2018/01/florence-view-from-piazzale-michelangelo.html
Thanks for the comment! Actually, there is no need to follow the 575 format since the Indoeuropean languages are quite difficult to compare to the Japanese sound syllable pattern.
Good haiku, although not in 5-7-5 haiku format...
ReplyDeleteWatch a haiku in a video in Youtube at https://youtu.be/pg1apQjPrkY
Read also article in http://stenote.blogspot.com/2018/01/florence-view-from-piazzale-michelangelo.html
Thanks for the comment!
DeleteActually, there is no need to follow the 575 format since the Indoeuropean languages are quite difficult to compare to the Japanese sound syllable pattern.
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