23 February 2018

od mirisa livade
jači 
miris pokošene trave

 
the scent of mown grass
stronger than
the scent of a meadow
 

5. Susreti haiku pjesnika, Ravna Gora 2017. / 5th Haiku Meeting in Ravna Gora 2017
(iz zbornika/from the miscellany)

2 comments:

  1. Good haiku, although not in 5-7-5 haiku format...
    Watch a haiku in a video in Youtube at https://youtu.be/pg1apQjPrkY
    Read also article in http://stenote.blogspot.com/2018/01/florence-view-from-piazzale-michelangelo.html

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    1. Thanks for the comment!
      Actually, there is no need to follow the 575 format since the Indoeuropean languages are quite difficult to compare to the Japanese sound syllable pattern.

      http://www.nahaiwrimo.com/home/why-no-5-7-5

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