drevni hram . . .
stari redovnik iznova skuplja
nove latice
ancient temple . . .
the old monk gathers
new petals over again
Iz ''Osmijesi pod trešnjama'' (Haiku putopis iz Japana) / From ''Smiles Under The Cherries'' (A haiku travelogue from Japan)
__ Nice, Dejan!
ReplyDeleteI keep finding new petals. Smiles! _m
Thank you so much!
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ReplyDeleteover the old
more sky revealed
Adelaide
Beautiful version! Thank you!
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