15 November 2019

skinute čarape ...
pred mojim stopalima 
pobjegle ribe 


socks off . . . 
before my feet 
fishes fleeing 


Haiku časopis IRIS br. 13 / IRIS haiku magazine No. 13 – 2019


4 comments:

  1. No nibbles on your toes?

    Adelaide

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  2. __ Warm water splash scares the fish; hope I "hooked" the correct translate; nice! _m

    ribe odelete
    poput krila ptice
    Pljusnem noge

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    1. Yes,you did. I like the translation and new image.

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  3. No, this time they find them pretty much distasteful :-)

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